Sunday, August 20, 2006

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does it hurt when you feel alone
Cutting in deep straight through the bone?
Surrounded by darkness and feeling so cold
Wanting touch when theres no one to hold
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Megan Dugan
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Brian Dorn 20 August 2006

Megan, great line at the end, I'd say that line speaks volumes. Well done and keep writing! ! Brian

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