with nobody to care
with no love
emptyness is crawling
upon me
a shadow taunting me
everywhere i turn.
i feel alone
in the big wide world! ! !
nothing to worry
nothing to get excited
nothing to hope for
i am wasted
Filled with emptiness and loaded with lonliness. Showing the suffering of a sad soul that is alone. Well done.
a shadow taunting me everywhere i turn. i feel alone in the big wide world! , , ........ loneliness siluhouettes by solitude love seems locked up in room of blue, , , as sky is alone by reeks of deep darkness gusty wind yet taunts by sadness..................excellent exposition of heart when emptied of love, sadness flows crippling passion, wrugt ingenious by sadness, well penned,10+++++, thanks for sharing
The presentation here is excellant for this poem. There is very little to say in words so it doesn't take many. The three verses are used well. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The whole world to care But you are not aware CP