Alone Poem by chella Death

Alone

Rating: 3.5


I love being alone my friend
but thats not the end
I rather run with the wind brushing on me
don't beg or say please
I don't care if we like the same show or food
thats not good
but when u are hurt and scared with fear
will there be a cear
to the illness I have in my heart
I can make it into a art
even if we like the same video game or books
it is not about the looks
a friend is someone that cares about you
don't cut lose lou
I rather be alone with no friends
still not the end
I can play a sad song in my mind
why don't be so kind
now go away even I know I'm surrounded but people
they can never get to my level
goodbye my not best friend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 20 July 2009

rather be alone with no friends still not the end.......................a friend with good heart yet friend indeed, that truly melts the loneliness.beautiful expression of choice by friendship, wellpenned,10 fro me.thanks for sharing

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Homa Mousavi 24 July 2009

It's a pleasure to read such honest and heartfelt poem. Keep up the good job and thanks for sharing.

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cud be written in a better way with expressing ur feelings using poetic devices so as to make the poem more interesting, correct one line.... 'i can make into AN art' read my poem, All Alone! ! ! m sure u'll get to know what is loneliness exactly about...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2010

but when u are hurt and scared with fear will there be a cear to the illness I have in my heart I can make it into a art.......if that stage comes in life thenit is preferred always to be alone.it consoles sometimes... finepiece of writing.....10 read mine cry not...you go alone

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Js Black 16 September 2009

Terrific insight for one so young...keep up the good work...Jeff.

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Sarah Hanbury 02 September 2009

Thank you for the comment on my poem, You write in a unique way, I can see the beauty behinde your poem.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 01 August 2009

i sense love trying to break through words. good write marcella.

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