No one sees the pain within her eyes,
No one see that she covers everything with lies,
No one cares,
No one is ever there to help her up when she falls.
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last word in your poem is misspelled. but this was a great poem. i loved it. top 2 bottom very very good. i cant wait to read more.
dear poet............... the coolest thing ever.. we share the same first names.. you wrote well, though i'd like you to look it over... hey... we share the same first name........... thsts soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool.
a great poem! ! awesome....i knw what u feel.....same feeling here... please read my poems BROKEN HEART n BREAK UP.... 10+ frm me!