Alone...~ Poem by together forever

Alone...~

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No one sees the pain within her eyes,
No one see that she covers everything with lies,
No one cares,
No one is ever there to help her up when she falls.

All she needs is someone to show her love,
All she needs is someone to care for her,
As much as she cares for them.

She doesn't want to be Alone any more.
She doesn't want to try to heal her heart be herself.
All she wants is not to be alone...

~Leslie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Heart 22 July 2009

a great poem! ! awesome....i knw what u feel.....same feeling here... please read my poems BROKEN HEART n BREAK UP.... 10+ frm me!

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Keith Hendrickson 21 July 2009

last word in your poem is misspelled. but this was a great poem. i loved it. top 2 bottom very very good. i cant wait to read more.

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dear poet............... the coolest thing ever.. we share the same first names.. you wrote well, though i'd like you to look it over... hey... we share the same first name........... thsts soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool.

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