Tricia Lemaster

Rookie (10.13.94 / In my lovers arms, United States)

Alone - Poem by Tricia Lemaster

Two hots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun,
Like an assassin.. who does it for fun.
Two deafening blows, in a war that has just begun,
Life gone away.. I'm done.
Two red roses sitting on my coffin, the wind blow, leaving only one,
The world I know disappears.. like the setting sun.


Comments about Alone by Tricia Lemaster

  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/24/2009 11:48:00 AM)


    Very well written...
    U 've a good imagination...
    Just work on it... :)
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  • Romeo Della Valle (12/20/2009 11:41:00 AM)


    Tricia, this a well penned poem, I know the feeling, I felt like that before and you can see it in my poem titled 'A TASTE OF LONELINESS', you got my vote 10+++ keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 20, 2009



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