Alone Poem by Eddie Dean

Alone

Rating: 4.5


Gritty sand graces my back
The stars mock my surrender
Though they understand my plight
The waves of the tide crash and break

They sound hungry
Like the stars, I lay stuck
My celestial counterparts glimmer
I can hear their laughter

They know loneliness
Though it is learned over millennia
My severance is still fresh
Once part of a whole
Now food for the waves

Their cool touch enrobes me
I can hear my heart beating
Yet it is still broken
She was ripped from me

Most of my heart went with her
The hungry tide claims my face
I shut it out till I burst
It burns my lungs

The stars wink though my casket
I hear them laugh
The world fades
She is calling me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! This is a great and powerful write rich in imagery and fine texture. It has become your stepping stone that will lead you, Eddie, into the Poetry World, graciously! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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