Alone Poem by Aditi (piu) Guha

Alone

Rating: 5.0


'Alone' is a poem where a child feels lonely specially if he/she
miss any near and dear ones.
This poem is the most deepest feeling for a father when he is no more in this world and have died all of a sudden.
When you cannot share your life, the thought with your father when you need him the most.

'Alone'

When I need you most,
You left me alone.
To feel the blessings of your hand,
I was left alone with the sand.
To walk beside you,
Will never come true.
You left me in solitude forever.

Now, I want to see you,
Want to hold your hands.
To walk with you with full pride,
I can make the world aside.
I cannot recover without your medicine,
It's long time that I have seen
Your face with bright smile.
O father, without you I have to walk long mile.
You are my father; You are my friend,
I will teach life never to bend,
Never to retreat, never to break,
I shall follow the way you make.
Proud to be thy child.

O father, where do you locate,
I cannot find the way to the gate
Through which you exit from life.
Tell me now, tell me,
It's long time I have seen you.
Through which field, through which valley,
You make the way to which alley.
Tell me father to which way,
To which way my life shall sway.
You never let my wish to fail,
Tell me which way should I sail,
Just to see you and hold your hands.

Do you see me in daily life?
Life not roses but sharp knife.
Alone I stand, alone I go,
With the busy crowd's row.
'Midst the crowd I stay alone,
I know nobody to whom I am known.
I sleep, I wake,
I know my way to make.
But tell me father, tell me now,
To which way you went and how.

I wish to know where you went,
I want to repeat the time I spent.
Pray for you father you live in peace,
You are my father I will miss,
The touch of your hand,
The smile of your face,
The way you dance,
The story you tell,
I know father you cannot forget me,
Wherever you are, you can see
The life I am living without thee.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Aditi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you

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Subodh Pandey 16 February 2012

nice write aditi a perfect 10

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Madan M 16 February 2012

when I read this, a feel of deep and lovely spirit missing from me

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Pranav Gothic 14 February 2012

I was 12 when my dad passed away. I totally felt your poem.10/10

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