Monday, October 10, 2011

Alone Comments

Rating: 2.9

I just want to find an oasis in the desert.
I just want to see a spark in the darkness.
I just want to get my breath in the asphyxiating gas.
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Gabe Florsheim
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Roseann Shawiak 22 January 2014

Very intense manifestation of being alone and wanting to be yourself. Can identify with your thoughts, great poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Romeo Della Valle 10 October 2011

Speechless! What a heart touching, well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! I think that the perfect title for this thought provoking poem would be MY WISH, it would fit right! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more of such amazing writes! God Bless You! Romeo from New York City! Love and Peace for always! ...

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