Saturday, August 22, 2015

Alone And Hiding Comments

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Wind whistling through the night, nothing to stop
it's eerie lonely sound.

Reminding me of a child happily walking through
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 August 2015

Hi Roseann, Reading your poem, i looked back at my own childhood and could hear the whistling wind. In my native village in Kerala. i was always aware of the cool, fragrant breeze that blew specially in the evenings. i particularly loved the sound of the leaves fluttering in the breeze. But i never felt lonely or frightened. It was a very pleasant experience for me.

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David Wood 22 August 2015

I never hear the wind unfortunately. Something I would love to hear but you paint an excellent picture. Lovely poem.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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