Alone In The Dark Comments
I am sitting alone,
In the darkness of night.
Holding up my self as tight,
I guess there something behind.
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It's a wonderful start, your first poem is rich in description and flow of words. It's a lovely description of loneliness. I rate it 10.
A good narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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12/16/2025 11:15:40 PM # 1.0.0
A great start with a nice poem, Jule. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks