Monday, July 28, 2025

Along The Beach Comments

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When pleasant dreams greet me at night,
To seek your face that tender sight.
As shadows fall i drift asleep,
You are the soul i long to meet.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Isadora Quagmire 01 September 2025

Absolutely brilliant! You combine feelings of sorrow and longing in such a skilled way. Thank you for sharing this superb piece : )

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Jayne Louise Davies 03 September 2025

Thanks Isadora x I'm very greatful for your lovely comments x

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Sunny Quagmire 31 August 2025

Such a beautiful piece! How well it conveys how much you miss your loved ones! I love the dream imagery in it! Truly loved this poem!

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Jayne Louise Davies 03 September 2025

Thank you so much Sunny x Much appreciated!

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Timber Koleden 29 July 2025

A fantastic poem that is so full of longing, sorrow and nostalgia! Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminiscence!

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 September 2025

Many thanks Timber for your kind comments x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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