Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 701,052 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Aloof And Alone - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Whisper gently with care
Listen to what others correspond
Respond in tune with
You will be liked like perfume

Thoughts match
It attempts to catch
The same signal
Upon its arrival

It has same intensity
With almost equal quality
Not lacking any zeal
It seems real

I have often said
And on table laid
My ideas with earnest
They have served as best

I have stood aloof
Many times without proof
Yet victory was apparent
As I lived with reality in present

Never talked with irrelevance
Never left it to chance
Never looked back even at once
I have always loved truth’s presence


Comments about Aloof And Alone by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    I liked it


    Alexander Glascoe2 hours ago
    Good
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    it says that he truth is real and that that the yruth is like perfume meaning it is good. it also says that even if the truth is unbelievable at the time, justice will prevail and it will eventually be believed.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    Carol2 hours ago
    i think this poem is nice and i love the fact that whatever the poem was referring to was concealed until the last line
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2013 9:30:00 AM)

    It is good.


    Rylene Irvin2 hours ago
    It is good.
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    Wisdom
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2013 9:30:00 AM)

    Michelle Hadley2 hours ago
    If one can truly understand it.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (11/25/2013 7:22:00 AM)

    always loved truth's presence, I love it. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/25/2013 7:20:00 AM)

    Whisper gently with care
    Listen to what others correspond
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, November 25, 2013


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