Alternative Place Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Alternative Place



Alternative place

What does it speak?
When you fail to get even tick
Notice on board
You will find no word

All poems go unnoticed
Only selected people get some comments indeed
It becomes futile exercise
When you can feel only surprise

How can we term it literature space?
When there is no trace
For your verses?
It goes with misses

Poets write with zeal
And make it look real
But find no takers
It makes me to roar in laughter

Well it may be tradition
To which we are not putting any question
But it is fact
Why not other poets react to this?

If there are selected people
Who chose to be special individuals?
Well it serves no purpose
One needs to find some alternative place

Alternative Place
Wednesday, October 26, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2016

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2016

Shrikrishna Ubale You wrote reality....! But even if no one is commenting on non -selected poets, writers...! Not to worry just write and write go ahead...! Express and feel good...! Self joy...! Enjoy...! Unlike · Reply · 1 · 3 mins 26 Oct

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2016

x Pelo Pelo Makhathini Jo jo jo im blessed to be da part of poetry side let it spk to da people Unlike · Reply · 1 · October 28 at 4: 08pm today by

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AJ Lyley Rankali sowi hlk.... Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs 26 Oct

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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