Friday, May 8, 2009

Although...~ Comments

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Although you may not love me,
Although you may not care,
If you shall ever need me,
You know I’ll always there.
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together forever
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Broken Heart 22 July 2009

such a sweet poem! ! itx great! ! ur a great writer.... 10+ again

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Keith Hendrickson 21 July 2009

very very nice flow. i loved the way u ended this 1 too 'all the oceans in the worl cannot hold the tears ive cried' man i love that. very good.

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nice rhymes, nice form... don't hold in the tears.. cry. but only for the worthy

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