CHANDRA RAMSAHOI

Alvida

Good Byes
When we leave our homes
When we talk on the phone
When we go on a trip
When our hearts are rip

When we graduate
When its in our fate
When we marry
When our coffin they carry

Never say good bye
It brings joy and pain
Say God bless, take care
With hope that we will meet again

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 11, 2007
Poem Edited: Thursday, April 7, 2011

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Comments about Alvida by CHANDRA RAMSAHOI

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (7/2/2008 8:27:00 PM)

    Sage advice and philosophy. Pretty good rhymes though the structure
    was a bit uneven. A very well done, clear and concise poem with no
    detours for the reader. I recommend it.

    GW62

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