Always Poem by Timothy Weiermann

Always

Rating: 5.0


I have always loved the sun
Light caress on skin
I have always loved the sun
Leaves float soft on wind

I always loved her
Light caress on my skin
I always loved her
Hair flowing soft in wind

But I’ll never see her shine
Because she’ll never be mine

I always loved her,
I always loved her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 14 April 2009

There is really not much to this. The reader comes away from this asking why the writer didn't give the reader more to think about. Not in terms of guessing what the writer is saying, but just in terms of saying something interesting. So, There really is nothing much to review here. Very little substance. GW62

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