A Part Of Two Poem by Timothy Weiermann
A Part Of Two
The sun is sinking,
While her mind is thinking
My skies are blinking,
Blinking from dark to bright
It all depends upon the light
The light in her eyes
They control my skies
What must I sew?
Where can I sew us together?
However can we survive the weather,
The weather that tears others apart
When all we have is a single heart
Where do we go?
Where can I go?
Where?
When I’m only a part of two
I like the imagery...be sewn together seems like a fresh idea. Nice work. Hugs, dee
Nice poem. I like the poetic whirlpool in the first paragraph.
hey Tim, beautiful imagery with the sun and the skies and the light in her eyes what else is there to sew! ! ! ! ! ! ! when your only a part of two You have great potential though so very young--very matured and intelligent keep up your beatiful writes. I love to read your poems.+++++++++++++++++++100000000000000000000000 love anjali
Very deep it really makes one think. I really enjoyed it!
your thoughts flowed very well in this peice, flowing stedily from thinking to questioning. that is good in a young writer like yourself
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is really good...You and the Girl share the same heart.