For You Poem by Timothy Weiermann

For You

Rating: 5.0


For you my skies no longer stand dark,
Long into the hours of day
For you my heart has sung right from our start
And 'I love you' I long to say

With you my mind stands clear
Glimpsing no longer through the haze
As long as I can call you my dear
Love no longer seems a maze

With you my rapids slow to a calm
Love’s no longer a flowing river
You fix my wounds with loving balm
It no longer stands, joyfully bitter

Confusion breaks, clearing the way
Making to form a brighter day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anong All 06 October 2008

Ah, i enjoyed your poem, flows very nicely..

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Evaughn Gray 07 October 2008

wow that poem was just beautiful, short and sweet. amazing write..~Love Hazel G.E

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immortal Butterfly 20 March 2009

This Is Very Sweet And I Agree With Ershad Mazumder Love Is Undescribable.

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Ershad Mazumder 17 October 2008

Very good expression of love in words.But love can not be described. You just feel it.

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Angel (Pepper lyons) 09 October 2008

That was really good tim. I know you have most deffinetly scored with ur girl...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 October 2008

Hi Tim, its about time you tellin ya honey ' cry me a river....i'll be ur ocean'......

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Tyease Collins 07 October 2008

Wow this is extremely beautiful. There was a smoothness to this poem that i liked. It just flowed so nicely. This is really nice. I really wish i could write poetry like you ^.^ Have a nice day -Tyease C.

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