Always Dared Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Always Dared
I thought of creating something new
As mind was upset with little place for few
Ideas to let in and invade vacant place
I had applied break for their chase
The poet does not meant to write everyday
And receive brickbats or praises each day
Many may exclaim with “wows” and many with open spears
I hardly breathe peacefully and certainly fear
“No, no, you should always try to write”
The inner voice forced me something new to delight
Offer great version presented before
I accepted the challenge and began to explore
I thought of becoming small kid
Who was shy boy and had no lead
Just torn shirt on body and not much to cover
But had kind parents to offer shelter
Mother just surfaced before eyes
I used to refuse food despite their several tries
She used to call me and advice in mild tone
It was regular practice before I used to dine
This was the only thing I remembered
She was the only one member
In family to take my care
I was naughty too and on her name always dared
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good job Nikki Myobb24 minutes ago you def have talent... I love the use of ur vocabulary very talented Comment 0 Good
I liked the tempo and the style of your syntax Lauren Brennan21 minutes ago I liked the opening lines and thought it was clever to write about writing. I thought that there was a disconnect between the beginning of the poem and the last several stanzas. Comment +1 okay poem ...
Tom P.23 minutes ago This was an okay poem. It sounded as though English is not your primary language, which is okay. But that is a detraction in poetry, unfortunately. Comment +1 ... ...
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I would like to translate this poem
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I thought of creating something new As mind was upset with little place for few