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Am I Pretty Enough Now?

Rating: 5.0

I once knew this girl,
she loved this boy oh so much,
finally one day,
she got the courage to tell him,
exactly how she felt.
Only to find out,
that the boy didn't like her in that way,
and everyday she would ask him why?

then one day,
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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 September 2008

.....good composition.........10

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Ndidi Ubogu 29 January 2006

Oh Ashley, anytime i read your poetry i always try to place myself in the shoes. Actually, if i happened to be the boy, i do not think I will be happy for the rest of my life because i am the cause of her death. I will learn from that and i will make sure to accept any girl for who she is. I feel that no matter how ugly someone may be, there is no one that is ugly, because some may be ugly outside but very beautiful inside. But it is so sad that the poetry ended that way, but i tell you, that is the best way because it is a poem. And that makes it a very nice and touching poetry. Good effort, and i am glad that you are back.......................

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Mickey Pig Knuckles 29 January 2006

Ashley, I am so glad you have decided to share this poem with us as its something meaningful from You and anything from you is a keepsake treasure. I know its been a while but seeing your pens ink flowing again sure makes me smile. Your Reading Fan, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

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