Amazing What She Can Do To You Poem by August Sky

Amazing What She Can Do To You

Rating: 4.0


Hurtin' on the inside
Thing I'll never show
Take a drink man
Chill now and sip it slow

Got a lil' buz now
My knees and my feet
Float above ground
Still I feel incomplete

Time goes by-nothin happens
Feelin' worse
I want to forget it all
The hurt, the happiness, the her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kayla August 03 February 2007

Wow! ! really nice sky! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Patricia Gale 03 July 2006

Love's broken ways, wonderful rhyme.

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Meghan - 03 July 2006

I've felt like this before. Great poem, you really captured the emotion. Meghan

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August Sky

August Sky

Akron, Ohio
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