An Early Retirement Comments

You have poured your heart into the poem. I have seen and felt what you have written as I manged 6000 persons working in factory, daily facing problems of health, security, money, promotions. Of course, I was lucky to have started at the top but Marxist theories charmed me in my youth so much that I used to feel I was a communist capitalist, at least we can have a generous heart even being part of the management! Your poem is par excellence as it brings before eyes the pathos of working life which takes so much toll of humans that they might not need retirement as their life becomes brief. Deserve 10+++ Thanks.