An Early Retirement Poem by Terence George Craddock (Spectral Images and Images Of Light)

An Early Retirement

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There's an ad on TV about retiring.
I'm not worried about retiring.
I'm retiring from life early.
It means I'm not... traditionally
going to live long enough to retire.

Just like all the old boiler makers in trade.
Who worked all those years, welding
inside pipes, and other enclosed spaces, places.
Sucking in all those harmful toxic fumes.
None of them lived long enough to retire.

Just like my father the carpenter.
An era when honest men daily worked up a blinder.

Just like my father hardest working carpenter.
Who worked all those long years, man-handling
heavy loads. Concreting, steel, heavy beams.
Straining the heart, arteries, neck, back, hands.
Working up a triple hernia. Before being killed
off, from lead based paint, and asbestos residue.

It is only management! And white collar workers!
Who have to worry, about saving, for retirement.
Worrying about, all that extra weight, accumulating.
On their lard asses, from all that gourmet cuisine.
While a real worker, will think he's done himself
proud, on pizza, fish and chips, and a few beers.

Just the ticket. Just the ticket. For a really good time.
Just about the only ticket, a real worker can afford.
To purchase, on his dismal daily pay, while paying rent.
Workers are dying. Instead of worrying about retiring.


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amrit Rathi 17 June 2010

You have poured your heart into the poem. I have seen and felt what you have written as I manged 6000 persons working in factory, daily facing problems of health, security, money, promotions. Of course, I was lucky to have started at the top but Marxist theories charmed me in my youth so much that I used to feel I was a communist capitalist, at least we can have a generous heart even being part of the management! Your poem is par excellence as it brings before eyes the pathos of working life which takes so much toll of humans that they might not need retirement as their life becomes brief. Deserve 10+++ Thanks.

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