An Eternal Day Poem by Kavitha Krishnamurthy

An Eternal Day



It was a somber milieu and the time was still
With a bleak heart I was spending that eternal day
Lost in my own train of thoughts
The train moving backwards at a sluggish pace
Numerous stations in this inimitable journey
The train halted at each and every station
Familiar faces, pleasurable experiences and disastrous moments
Flashed before my eyes at a rapid stride
The journey continued towards the next destination
Revisiting my life in reverse chronological order
My fellow passengers accompanying me
They got down when it was their turn
Finally I reached my expected destination
I found myself at the place where I started
I was utterly confounded by this bizarre expedition
Then the miasma vanished slowly and I came back to the present
I looked at the clock, at last it was going to be the end of the long eternal day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gita Ashok 24 June 2010

So much creativity and imagination here. Loved it absolutely. Revisiting my life in reverse chronological order So impressive!

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