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A savage hunger, An urge to devour; and thats the path of flow within till the array of decadence leading to total redemption, wonderfully wrought by imagery, quite passionate,10+++++, thanks for sharing

a lovely short poem.......10

Very fine imagery..with the strong feeling of hope.. But what could have done if the mouth just reappear? .. Expressive words..Thanks for sharing! A 10+++!

Enjoyed this composition a lot and gave my 10.

...well expressed......10+

well..what will happen if this day too gets one dusk old? the mouth will reappear... the urge to devour will creep again in... good imagery...good write 10

Sweet and simple with a message!