An Ode To Names Of Mother Goddess Comments

This seems well-written but too sophisticated for me, Savita. Nonetheless, I give your new poem five stars *****. : ) bri

'In six lines, eight of these names are paired in set of two.' I would use 'sets' of two. I suspect that some of the 'instrumants' in my Life Cycle symphony need tuning! ! !

stanza 4: again 'its', not 'it's' I especially like 'Awe-struck I am! ' I'm often 'awe-struck' when my wife and I disagree! !

Savita, 'Wandering at the corridors of my mind I dwell on it's poetic charm day and night.' I'd use 'in' the... OR just 'Wandering the corridors'. I like the imagery of verses wandering in your mind. I'd use 'its', not 'it's' poetic charm....of course. ;) ;)