Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

An Ordinary Man - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I am no saint but an ordinary man
Do the things in simple manner and as much as I can
I need not become a person in white clad dress
I sometimes miss a God and do not find trace

No doubt God is mentor and savior
But that all depends on our behavior
What even if you daily visit him in temple or church
You will find him no where in your futile search

God does not demand any type of worship
It is really a hype and simple whip
It is only meant to be little sympathetic
To fear from almighty and be little realistic

No one may argue in favor of daily congregation
No one may even buy your appeal for superstition
You worship him honestly from inner conscience
You will find him near by and feel the presence

The world is suffering not missing prayers
The biggest sin is loss of trust layers
You never see love in eyes of fellow brethren
This is biggest tragedy and burning concern

To miss a kind eye is biggest sin
Without love you can enjoy no win
God clearly emphasizes on love and sympathy
You then deserve his blessings and mercy


Comments about An Ordinary Man by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2012 9:50:00 PM)


    very well


    Robert Essex10 minutes ago
    it was a very well wrote poem
    Comment +1
    Very very nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2012 9:50:00 PM)


    Kevin Napier10 minutes ago
    I really like the flow of this poem and the momentum it builds. If you have heard some poets read their work a loud and heard them build momentum in their voice you know what I'm talking about. Very impressive.
    Comment +1
    Man here can be seen still as a very ambitious one....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2012 9:49:00 PM)


    This interesting work could use some editing. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2012 9:49:00 PM)


    Kevin8 minutes ago
    I related to the sentiment, but felt it was over-written. Contemplating the essence of the theme may both shorten an
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/26/2011 8:54:00 AM)


    To miss a kind eye is biggest sin
    Without love you can enjoy no win
    God clearly emphasizes on love and sympathy
    You then deserve his blessings and mercy
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 18, 2011


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