And I Dared To Touch You. Poem by Jona'e Levett
And I Dared To Touch You.
if i touched you, would you bleed?
would you lie writhe in pain.?
would you curse in waves of convulsions?
would you like it?
do you imagine your life,
without hate. loveless. emotionless?
does it make you shudder, or laugh?
do you live with your own self inflicted trauma openly?
does it make you happy?
are you too misrable to be tired of making yourself hopelessly unhappy?
are you alone because you are suffacated by the multitude of presence surounding your gureny?
Yes the poem has good content and subscribes to an active mind agree with the rhyme 10 Chris
ummm..... cud use some work, try watching the syllables and also try to make every other line ryme, it wudd give it a nice flow, otherwise i like the idea
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 5:28:29 AM # 1.0.0.1119
i love this poems dont need to rhyme or have the same syllables but they need to come from you let your heart flow keep it up 10++