Bhoobalan Sabari


And It's Still You..! ! - Poem by Bhoobalan Sabari

A Cerebropuncture in its way
That every drop of you drain away
For I've to live void your stay
Since you said, we aren't okay
And here goes all my pray
Asking your memories, swept away
No more that man from yesterday
So this is how we are to end our play
And there she stands by
Seeing the one last bye...
The memories are about to lie...
Close and open, my eye
Slowly..., I woke up, asking thy,
'I..., I..., I..., Honey, who am I? '

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Fourteener


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I'm undergoing a surgery to get rid of your memories since you said we aren't going okay. As I can't get rid off you with time, I have to go through this surgery. So I'm praying, once the surgery is done, your memories should be swept away. And you are standing right beside me for the last bye. As I went through the surgery, I'm getting up asking you, 'Honey, who am I? '. Even though I went to the extent of losing all my memories, I can't forget you. Even me, but surely not you..! !

Comments about And It's Still You..! ! by Bhoobalan Sabari

  • Kelly Kurt (11/22/2015 9:22:00 AM)


    Painful memories, wished to be excised. Thanks, Bhoobalan (Report) Reply

    Bhoobalan Sabari Bhoobalan Sabari (11/22/2015 3:53:00 PM)

    Your welcome... And thanks for your time reading..! ! 😊

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/20/2015 4:38:00 PM)


    Very amazing drafting shared here in this interesting context. Wisely penned.10 (Report) Reply

    Bhoobalan Sabari Bhoobalan Sabari (11/20/2015 11:43:00 PM)

    Thank you..! ! 😃

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 20, 2015



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