Tuesday, December 19, 2006

And She Will Come Comments

Rating: 5.0

Five minutes either way.
Five minutes from love.
Still you wait.
And she will come.
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Miriam Maia Padua 10 November 2008

beautifully written...expressed sweet longing for someone...i like the way you repeat..'and she will come' after every unsure words of infinite waiting... expressed patience and assurance to oneself that she will come...10+....

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Alison Smith 29 December 2006

Such is the ever ebbing tide of love found and lost.... Alison

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