And The World Keeps On Breaking Poem by Ben Partenay

And The World Keeps On Breaking

Rating: 5.0


bricks break, spread patterns around picture
frames, spider webs leading up, down, in

and the sidewalk breaks below, with pounds
of tip toe run walk feet, the glass breaks

to a window down the street outside, inside
a heart takes a last breath, and everything

breaks or breaks away from something, I hold
on, watch swallows dive from rooftops in their

mad love making fall, plummet towards
where everything ends in a stone breath goodbye, I

look up from cracked pavement, over soot rooftops
the night breaks into dawn

Tuesday, June 26, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
BEAU GOLDEN 28 October 2008

yes the rhythm, the imagery, the art memorable ben.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 26 June 2007

Love the staccato rhythm, it breaks the framework while keeping a filigree of connections, and the subtle innuendo of alliterative riffs. Great piece. Rgds, Ivan

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