Angel Poem by Mysterious Slim Lecture

Angel

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Still I have this fear.
Tell me it's not it that I hear.
Allow me to be near
So this can all be clear.

Thine provides me with brightness
Which still removes my dumbness.
Is it because thine is spotless?
That makes me to negatives be speechless.


Please let the truth not to fold.
Allow it to be bold.
Because it will never go old
Just like studs of gold.

Still I can't let go
If it takes it then I'll bow.

Sunday, June 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
trying to please a girl to meet me after she broke up with me over the phone. After I walked her home peacefully.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 June 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful love poem, well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 June 2019

Write comment. Such a lovely start, M. S. L. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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