I rememeber that night when death was so near.
I remember being in your arms whispering in your ear.
I remember the tear filled eyes and unhappy faces.
Thinking to myself ' why here of all places? '
It happened oh so quickly my life began to fade.
I didnt see the light only a darkening shade.
My eyes began to close and I couldnt see your room.
The mistakes I made had brought me my doom.
You could see my life ending begging me to hang on.
But I couldnt stop my death no matter how wrong.
And you heard my heart stop beating but you wanted not to cry.
As your sympathetic whispers told a tale of bad goodbyes.
And as my soul drifted into a place no one knows.
You went to my grave and placed one lonely rose.
But I could see it all as i watched over you.
Trying to show that youre wish came true.
I did live on but not the way you'd exspect.
My soul your angel of no regrets.
Btw The second couplet in the third stanza was from Hailey Turmans poem only a memory
So sad it made me start o cry. I had tears coming down my eyes. Great write
The mistakes I made had brought me my doom. great line. that is a really good poem. you are a good poet and your only 12 that is amazing. Becca
You are an amazing poet for being 12, that one of the best poems i have ever! Keep writing
awesome poem! i like how you used a line from another poem and wove it into your own
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good job on this one Kyla, I like it a lot...