Angel of Darkness

Rookie (May 23,1992 / North Carolina)

Angel On My Shoulder - Poem by Angel of Darkness

There's an angel on my shoulder,
asking me whats wrong?
and as i speak the words to her
she starts to sing a song

This song she sings is powerfull
yet its the saddest song you'll hear.
She sings a song of pain and love,
even the angel has a tear.

She sang of how she found true love,
and how she let it go.
she sang of how she pushed aside
the only love she'd know

she sang of how she pushed him away
to find another love thats true
she sang of how she looked at him
as he spoke the words 'thats you'

She never faulted in her words
as she sang and as she cried
for as she sang she told me
of how her true love died

She said he died of a broken heart
that only she could mend
her true love died because of her
his true love and friend

as the angel sang her final words
she looked at me and said
Kolee this is not my song
but your true loves instead

There's an angel on my shoulder
asking me whats wrong
asking me to love you,
and to never hear your song.


Comments about Angel On My Shoulder by Angel of Darkness

  • Romeo Della Valle (8/14/2011 12:40:00 AM)

    Speechless! What an impressive and well penned write that really shows your poetic talent!
    The is thought provoking write reminds me of the time when I wrote two poems about angels: A MISSING ANGEL and AN ANGEL AND A VIOLIN! of all my poems, these two are my favorite! I really felt them deeply in my heart! If time permits, I would love for you to read them and I hope you enjoy them! A well deserved 10+++ for this poignant write! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....
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  • (6/9/2008 4:02:00 PM)

    one word....AWESOWE! ! i loved it. you are a great writter.10/10. (Report)Reply

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  • Alan Curtis (12/4/2007 9:33:00 AM)

    Brovo, brovo! That was one of the best poems I've read so far on this site.Keep it up Grl.


    Peace and Love,
    Alan
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, July 15, 2011


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