() Angel's Wings () Poem by Kieran J1996

() Angel's Wings ()

Rating: 2.3


A darkness envelops me,
Glowing as dark as the night,
All disappears,
Including the light,

Soft feathers touch,
Caress my pale skin,
Shivers down my spine,
As my heart thunders within,

Surrounded with pleasure,
What should I do,
The darkened curtains,
I cannot see through,

Then I realize,
Who/What it must be,
Come to protect,
An angel for me,

Suddenly they open,
The obsidian wings,
With a resonating sound,
That only an angel sings,

Then I look,
See his face,
And once again,
My heart skips a pace,

What glowing beauty,
Superior presence,
And I know that within,
Is a blinding essence,

In just one look,
I see it all,
His magnificent power,
His gift to enthral,

Yet I know what I feel,
Is all down to me,
Perhaps I've found Him,
And now we're meant to be...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010

This is a very deep poem that people can relate to and very good use of words! Keep up the good work!

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Miche- Mell ... 22 July 2010

Its a very eloquent poem, beautiful description! well done!

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Miche- Mell ... 22 July 2010

Its a very eloquent poem, beautiful description! well done!

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Miche- Mell ... 22 July 2010

Its a very eloquent poem, beautiful description! well done!

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2010

What glowing beauty, Superior presence, And I know that within, Is a blinding essence, is it an apparition or a vision or an imagination or a realization? anyhow u hve wonderfully portrayed your visionary experience. thank u very much.

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Marcondes P 27 June 2016

When I read your poem, I really saw the image of an angel before an human. Congratulations!

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Minnie Gehrig 19 August 2010

beautiful, I love the imagry very vivid!

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Dey Blanket 02 August 2010

great poem, the words that you use have soo much drama behind them, i love how to you tell a story in your poetry.

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An exceptionally powerful insightful and interesting write. Wonderful in conception.

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UnKnown Messenger 28 July 2010

I simply adore this poem. It's probably the best you've written yet. And I know words are not enough to praise it but I wish people could learn something from its beauty. 'Yet I know what I feel is down to me', I think this understanding is an angel all in itself. In the state of mind when we acknowledge that we're not so forlorn as we think we are. Beautiful poem.

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