Nisha Butterflydreams

Angels Living In Colorless Harmony - Poem by Nisha Butterflydreams

They have set my soul upon the skies;
My fate has sent me with teary eyes;
All i can view are colorless rainbows;
The angels too, have lost their shadows,

There's suffering in every expression;
But they're laughing at my exhibition;
Wondering why, no place for sympathy;
How would i survive this alone, emotionally

It's when i learned why angels laugh and sing;
To suppress the danger of enemies within;
They believe, trust no one, none is worthy;
Regardless of their bestowing harmony,

No matter what we receive in suffering;
Don't let the phase halt you from loving;
Let compassion fill your hearts hollow;
Happily you will live, these words just follow: -)

When you die, where do you go? You arrive where Angels reside: -)

Comments about Angels Living In Colorless Harmony by Nisha Butterflydreams

  • (7/5/2011 7:49:00 AM)

    I lost my long original comments. However. I applaud you for writing about angels. But they are far more complex a topic than people imagine. Other religions share them besides the Christians. Angels have one main purpose. Their name takes a certain format.To make up an angel name is hard. In France the peasants in the Carmague area because they are in tune with the earth have a certain reverance towards Angels.It is a cultural thing.
    Back to your poem.What I found was your poem lacked th story line that would keep the reader's attention. Long or short most poems have that story line.Go through line by line and weigh up what you intend to say. Make each line tie in with the one above and below, even if in a small way. The benefits are worth the effort. Who can say if your poem is finished? Only you can answer that question. Does it look easy? What is the meaning of colourless rainbows? Is that not a contradiction? A rainbow is composed of seven colours and then to imply it is without colour means you had something in mind, but perhaps it was not as you wrote it.
    Best wishes and keep writing.It is the only way and we all need good luck.
    Poem award winner
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  • (4/28/2011 8:35:00 AM)

    Wow... That was intense! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 28, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 6, 2011

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