Ethereal moist eyes
So blue and deep
I almost drowned
In the depth of her snowy azure sea.
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What a memorable observation....sometimes it so happens so touching to meet with incidents and people...so commonly in everyone's daily life.....you've worded very well...especially I like the suitable title the most
this is a beautiful poem, Jayati... I like the way it develops... 'Ethereal moist eyes... Austere eyes... Melancholic eyes...' Eyes are indeed a window to the soul... Eyes say, rather reveal, many things to the sensitive 'beholder'... best wishes, Asma...
a very sensitive poem, it deserves the right reader with the right 'eyes' to appreciate it, it contains a multitude of emotion,
A good start with a nice poem, Jayati. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.