Another Faliure Poem by Dana Amer
Another Faliure
There is something thats pulling me back
I don't know why it's sucking me in,
every time i wanna change the track
i slowly tend to simply give in.
New faliure always added
for every plan i make,
& that glowing hope faded
when i did the same mistake.
Now again i feel blue
a cloud of sadness over my head,
I feel helpless & there is nothing i can do
to make me stop crying in my bed.
I wish i'll live to see the day
when i sleep without worrying,
when i can finally find the way
& when i stop planning! !
yes I agree with your idea..one should nt be worried and leave all worries behind and enjoy..specially when its own time for rest... well done and like your following stanza...10++++++++++ wish i'll live to see the day when i sleep without worrying, when i can finally find the way & when i stop planning! !
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4/19/2024 2:39:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Yes, life sure will bring disappointments in so many things, but you confide in your writing how you feel and it is familiar to me. Your poem rings true. Nice writing.10/10.