Breaking Up Poem by Dana Amer

Breaking Up



Sorry dear
I didn't mean to hurt you,
Don't cry another tear
I wish it didn't had to be so.

Sorry because i broke your heart
But i couldn't take this anyomre,
Are we togather or appart? !
I can't tell a difference for sure! !

I'm always the one who asks
& you didn't seem to care,
Why do i have to do all the tasks
While you are never there? !

I have decided to break up
You caused me a great pain,
I guess you should give up
& never call this number again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brigid Guthrie 02 August 2009

I understand where your coming from... Well written...10 (:

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Anjali Sinha 05 July 2009

wowwwwwwwwwww a touching one really beautiful anjali

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I have decided to break up You caused me a great pain, ... very hard to digest but realities donot mix up... very forceful poem... i lke it and give full 10 read mine mary to marry, no separateways, butterflies around and divorce.. all to augment ur poems... comment

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Afzal Shauq 02 July 2009

I have decided to break up You caused me a great pain, I guess you should give up & never call this number again. yes sure sometimes we feel like we are turned to others.. its our commitment to others... empathy is like that.. here is this poem, it shows that you are more then yourself.. you stay inside you body but think about the humankinds and feel you as part of them.. good intation here I see in your personality... well done and appreciate your talent...10++++++++

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Hala Hash. 22 June 2009

it's so true..: D Sad But True lol a5555 bsss

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