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Another Girl, But I Can'T Complain

Rating: 5.0

Have you ever seen the sky,
when it's gourging with love
that clouds cover it
and the stars
shine, peeking out, like a young girl's eyes?

And then cascades of raindrops like pearls,
then another runs down your spine?
But it is not rain;
the downpour is too deliberate

and glistening like memories of all your favorite girls.
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Laurie Hill 22 February 2009

lovely, really lovely poem and imagery and the stars shine, peeking out, like a young girl's eyes? 10

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Coach Roth 30 April 2008

Wow...the rhythm and imagery are first rate...but it's the passion it evokes which transcends the ordinary...I've only made a few attempts at romantic writing, after this, I will just leave it to you....Coach

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Marvin Brato 28 April 2008

Reality unveil that love can be found in many, it lingers in time, sweet to savor with another love at a time, but soon it will finally find a true love with only one! Great read, romantic and passionate love. A 10.

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