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An Unbalanced Heart

Rating: 5.0

It seems that when I was at my busiest point,
treading water in this chaotic sea of estrogen,
(that is my life)
you managed to waste my time,
make all these waves spin,
and break my heart.
One day, I was simply floating,
sea and sky on the horizon line.
Today, landscape is a mood,
always tasting salt in my throat and nose,

I feel myself open to sinking under
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Maxim Muyu 26 August 2008

I really loved this.

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Ershad Mazumder 24 August 2008

Life is nature.You can trim it, you can tailor it to suit your need.But you can not change it. It is weather, sunny, cloudy. Sometimes full of storm or full of soothing breeze. dear deliah, its really a very good piece. I like it.

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Viola Grey 24 August 2008

I really like the mood in this poem...the ocean is such a perfect metaphor for the effects of love...great work

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