Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 821,750 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Another Land - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Another land

How can I forget?
As you sealed my fate
Leaving me behind to face cruel world
But while walking I firmly held your hand

Since mother had left earlier
And there was no one to take care
I was still not aware of mother
As I had not seen her

You were at the helm of affairs
And ran house in order
With no complaint from my side
I was left not alone to decide

But you too took away my childhood
And I was left to wonder in neighborhood
With no cloths in order and hairs flying
I was standing at corner and crying

I lost my beautiful dream
And you were captain off team
Now I was left alone to drive
And surely hold all cards to survive

So I feel dejected
As you had departed
For another land
And here I was struggling to find real friends

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2017 7:33:00 AM)

    Joseph Harshberger Thank you Hasmukh Mehta a very heartfelt poem 😊
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2017 7:33:00 AM)

    welcome Joseph Harshberger
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2017 7:32:00 AM)

    welcome
    John Ackerman
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2017 7:02:00 AM)

    So I feel dejected
    As you had departed
    For another land
    And here I was struggling to find real friends
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 10, 2017



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