Spirit Litter

Another Try - Poem by Spirit Litter

There is a seed,
one that needs feed

There is a hole,
one that will house a growing soul

Shovel is near,
dirt beside ready to share

Clouds up high,
looking down from the sky

Tears ready to shower,
giving to the seed its natural power

Life will form,
to breed a swarm

Colors come to roll,
on a two sided bowl

As joy is born,
hell is torn

Leaving us with chance,
to set forth a new stance

Comments about Another Try by Spirit Litter

  • (4/28/2008 8:53:00 AM)

    first off lets say that it was a great poem it made me feel like i havent in years cause everyone used to tell me that my poems sucked but this poem drove that out and made me feel normal again thank you (Report) Reply

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  • john tiong chunghoo (4/26/2008 9:49:00 AM)

    first i feel the poem jerky but the content is good and well expressed. keepon spirit. (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2008 6:30:00 PM)

    I love ur poem. I like how you made each stanza rhym but yet make sense. Many people lack that in poem writng. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2008 11:09:00 AM)

    Nicely written poem. (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2008 1:35:00 PM)

    a new idea.nice poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008

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