bakuli bhakali

Gold Star - 6,033 Points (14/12/1986 / assam)

Anthem Of Love - Poem by bakuli bhakali

Oh Dear! Don’t take me for granted
For I love you
I’m not a casket of honey
That, each time you’ll come
And I’ll serve

Oh Dear! Don’t take me for granted
For I love you
I’m only me in every way possible
If I bloom as bud
I may fade as a flower

Oh Dear! Don’t take me for granted
For I need you
Life was not horrible without you
But it’s more beautiful with you

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Anthem Of Love by bakuli bhakali

  • Souren Mondal (11/21/2015 6:50:00 AM)


    'Oh Dear! Don’t take me for granted
    For I need you
    Life was not horrible without you
    But it’s more beautiful with you'

    Yes, but some people understand this a little too late.. Loved your use of the flower metaphor.. Love is like a flower plant.. One can't simply plant it and forget.. It takes time, care and hard work to turn a sapling into a tree with flowers..

    Thank you Bakuli. A fine poem oncr again...
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    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (11/21/2015 10:07:00 AM)

    you explained it well... better than what i did!
    thank you...

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/21/2015 5:02:00 AM)


    You have beautifully presented anthem of love. This fills color fade flower. Amazing sharing done really.10 (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (11/21/2015 5:23:00 AM)

    i appreciate you stopped by to encourage me!
    thank you so much! !

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2015



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