Derek Germain

Rookie - 3 Points (November 21,1985 - July 29,2037 / Escanaba)

Anywhere But Here

Poem by Derek Germain

We stand together on the pier.
I wish I were anywhere but here.
I search for words to say,
But the wind would only steal them away.
And it seems as though we're falling apart, like a dried out heart.
I wish we were like we once were before,
When everyday we fell in Love more and more.
Where did all our Love go?
Our Love was once a warm Summer day,
But now everything is covered in Snow.
I sense the end is near.
I wish I were anywhere but here.


Comments about Anywhere But Here by Derek Germain

  • Melvina GermainMelvina Germain (10/24/2006 10:56:00 PM)

    I love this Derek, as I've said to many poets in the past, everything changes, nothing stays the same. Good poem.---Melvina--(Report)Reply

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  • Linda Preston (3/29/2005 10:58:00 AM)

    rhyming couplets always make a poem sound forced - abandon them and you have better lexical choices available. Nice sentiments though(Report)Reply

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  • Rita El Khoury (3/4/2005 12:21:00 PM)

    Desperately awesome.
    Love the poem. thumbs up.

    *wish you could make your poems a bit longer...*(Report)Reply

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  • Anong All (3/4/2005 8:51:00 AM)

    Hello Derek,
    .....Your poem feels sad and alone, yet very nicely wrote.
    With Respect,
    Jodilee(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 31, 2004



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