Beneath the surface of a swamp
vile serpents slither
grasping the opportunity to seize
dangling feet
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Poemhunter Management sent me an e-mail stating: one vile bollywood type serpent, has had his poems deleted. this serpent was using slanderous language & rage to vent his anger, about nothing. which was un-poetic. i believe in the freedom of speech. i'm not perfect. i have actin' on occasion like a vile serpent too. i just want to write & post my poems, not intwine myself 'literally' with those other vile vicious so-called poetry writing snakes. their words/meanings/ is not poetry. there are fOOLS. watch their posts, you'll see. Your Words are an inspiration. Bollywood will not be missed. take care.
This scores a ten from me. All the battles, all the wars make me wonder how long the devastation presists. I always thought of these as there not being any winners, but you successfully point out that devastation is a winner so to speak...at least until it can be overcome or restored, if that's possible. I probably should say replaced with the new which might be the better way of thinking about redemption. Certainly things will never be the same again. Very nice work.
Never EVER will that happen when there are heartfelt writers like YOU around to disarm the evil that permeates from these dungheaps of humanity Theresa. They are just word abusers and will reap their just rewards in unpopularity swords, cutting their own poetic heads off (excuse the enthusiams, I am studying the French Revolution) Grinning at you, Tai
Well written and carries the sentiments and concerns of the majority top marks regards Chris