Apple Of Pain Poem by Tori Fleck Fournelle

Apple Of Pain

Rating: 5.0


Mistakes and regrets
Pain through the weeks
That's what you have to live with
Because of one stupid mistake
I chose to believe

The apple was lovely
So I took a chance
Where did that one chance bring me
But on my knees
Praying again and again
For this one nightmare to end

And as I sit here
With tears running down my face
I can't even question
Why you walked away

It was my mistake
It was my regret
And it's my pain
You have to live with
Because I chose to bite
The apple of pain
I guess I know now what happened
But now it's a little too late

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tess Bybee 11 September 2009

This poem is very good. Great job

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Nangula Immanuel 26 August 2009

I love the way you used the metaphor! It was a well thought out poem! Very nice tori! : -)

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Ashley Davis 10 July 2009

Very passionate loved every second! keep it up! gave it a 10!

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