Appreciate Poem by DeAngelo Smith

Appreciate

Rating: 4.5


How can a women be so fine but yet so ugly?
When a man does what he can and she still has the nerve to get grudgy.

It makes no since, how a women feels the need to want.
As if her looks can change the perspective of what her man acheives to get what she want.

A man will do his best to keep his women at a glow.
No man, who loves his women, wants her outdoors, looking like a hoe.

A women should appreciate all the things a real man does.
A real man takes care of home and Maybe, get your hair and nails done. Lol

Monday, September 15, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: hair,women
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alicia Smith 26 September 2008

Oh wow... And these comments are hilarious lol

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 September 2008

This is a very good poem Smith. It has such inner tones, that make the reader really enjoy it thoroughly.......Some kind of naked truth...very revealing. You can read my GUILLOTINE, SUPPRESSED TRUTH, ATONEMENT & WE'LL MEET. They have similar tones. I hope you appreciate them

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