s./j. goldner

s./j. goldner (March 2nd,1984 / USA)

Poems by s./j. goldner : 10 / 206

April Music - Poem by s./j. goldner

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I'd like to spend
April, sitting on a hill,
With a mushroom for
a parasol and violets
for a frill. And the
wind for a violin, To
play spring tunes,
And the blossoms in
the treetops, For gay
balloons. I'd like to spend
April sitting on a
mound, Watching for
the flowers to pop out
of the ground. With
their green silk stockings,
And new spring clothes,
Trying to look taller
by dancing on their toes!

1993

s./j. goldner

Poems by s./j. goldner : 10 / 206

Matthew Holloway (11/19/2018 3:37:00 AM)
A really colourful write, enjoyed (Report)Reply
james watkin (10/5/2018 6:18:00 AM)
Daintily beautiful - and comical - sentiments. Liked a lot. (Report)Reply
Jeanette Telusma (4/9/2017 2:56:00 PM)
Lovely poem, this is the season... (Report)Reply
Yoni Assis (6/28/2010 11:50:00 PM)
I've been looking for a good 'springtime' poem. It puts a smile on your face, imagining the serene situation. Garden of Eden-esque. (Report)Reply
Max Kuvaev (1/18/2009 11:16:00 PM)
What a nice poem. It's so touching! You obviously set your standards pretty high from the very start Susan Jane! ! ! (Report)Reply
Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (12/23/2008 11:39:00 PM)
Excellent imagery. I just loved the mushrooms for a parasol. The poem was music and I love it. Karin Anderson (Report)Reply
Kay Bressner (10/29/2008 3:30:00 PM)
I really like this poem. Wonderfully written; and nature is my favorite topic. (Report)Reply
Joseph S. Josephides (iosif S. Iosifidis) (9/28/2008 1:12:00 PM)
Golden cords playing music, among blossoms and call us to dance. Splendid imagery of April (heart of the Spring) . Golden cords shining under the sun of poetry! I give 10+ to amazing Susan of 9 years old! ! Thanks dearest Susan.
Joseph Josephides (Report)Reply
Tanny Quin (9/25/2008 5:36:00 PM)
'Flowers with green silk stockings'This is my favorite poem! ! ! Wish I were there now! ! Now has flowing words with wonderful imagiry! ! ! 10! ! (Report)Reply
Prasanna Kumari (5/31/2008 10:24:00 AM)
April Music filled my eyes and ears.....really beautiful... (Report)Reply
Aaron Eliad (2/1/2008 6:55:00 PM)
I liked this poem because it had April in it's title, and I could greatly appreciate how the music provided a comparison to nature. I thought this was nice and surrealistic. (Report)Reply
Shayne M (1/31/2008 2:10:00 PM)
I like that............................................................. (Report)Reply
Tara Teeling (1/16/2008 3:02:00 PM)
I adore this piece! I love the images in my mind right now, like I'm Alice and I flipped into the rabbit hole. Such wonderful descriptions, and what an ache I have for spring at the moment! Truly great, missy! (Report)Reply
Leonard Daranjo (10/24/2007 3:40:00 AM)
Beautiful - I love the lilt; I love the imagery; I love the interwoven message.

Take care (Report)Reply
Shannon Nagel (9/20/2007 5:31:00 PM)
Your imagery is amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Awesome job... the pictures you painted danced before my eyes and made me smile. I loved this! 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Keep up the great work. :)
Shannon (Report)Reply
Angela Barker (9/13/2007 12:31:00 PM)
MMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmm. I close my eyes and wish for april. Wonderful and vivid. (Report)Reply
Ben Gieske (9/12/2007 7:38:00 AM)
Beautiful. You take the ordinary and change it into the extraordinary. (Report)Reply
Lucianne Fasolo (9/10/2007 12:12:00 PM)
This was simply adorable. I loved it! (Report)Reply
James Niles (9/9/2007 1:45:00 PM)
Shall we meet in Portugal? Shall I bring the sonnets or shall thee? Perhaps we'll make them up together by the sea. (Report)Reply
Tailor Bell (8/22/2007 8:00:00 PM)
well somehow I missed this one in my previous tromps through your pages...and so, belatedly, it is a perfect study in meter control. love the innocent message and carefree feel. superbly divine. -Tailor (Report)Reply